What a bag of feces.
I know you just want some reviews on your skills, so allow me to review. First of all, there's a little-known thing on newgrounds that people seem to have forgotten called humor. When used properly, this thing can be an effective tool for making people laugh. This animation contained no humor whatsoever, save for a miniscule chunk that would only be understood by a 5 year old. You have moderately good animation skills, and I think in time you could become one of the better artists on NG, but until that time, try to refrain from posting anything too serious, as your definition of serious may make people want to commit suicide.